A VERY MALE FORM OF FICTION ([info]amory_vain) wrote,
@ 2007-07-09 03:16:00
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Dark Angel: Doing Business
Doing Business [[1019 Words]]
Dark Angel
Normal/Alec (sex), Max/Alec (friendship/maternalism, sorta)
Mixed-up timewise, so sorta AU.  Set shortly after Alec starts work at Jam Pony.  
Prostitution (sorta), Angst

Alec uses every advantage available.  An aspect I'd imagine incorporated into X5 training.


Alec was not a romantic. As far as he was concerned, “love” (Ordinaries’ word, not his) was nothing more than a chemical, biological process. Desire was hormonal, spurred on by the instinct to breed. Sex was just an act, a tool like the martial arts to be used against one’s enemy. 

Alec knew this; he’d learned it well at Manticore. Lust made humans weak, easy to manipulate with a look or a touch—It was just another aspect of his training. Intimacy was so easily gained: you let them use you, and suddenly you had an infinite advantage. 

That’s probably why he didn’t object when Normal pushed him up against the counter after work, groaning breathlessly about golden musculature and Roman gladiators. Those fucking daydreams, and it was sick, but Alec considered. By the time Normal was groping at his “sword,” Alec had run over the pros and cons of the scenario in his mind. As far as he was concerned, it was worth the pay and favors to allow the man closer, ready and wanting

Normal’s hands moved over his chest and shoulders, feeling. “You’re so firm...”

Alec stifled the urge to smirk, as though he’d never heard that awed tone before. Instead, it was easy to choke back a moan and lean forward, letting Normal breathe him in. “What do you want me to do, boss?” Open, ready.

When he spoke, his lips grazed the man’s ear; Alec felt him shudder pleasurably at the touch. This was too easy. Getting Normal off would take minutes—nothing, compared to the handlers who’d first trained and drilled him in this capacity. 

This one was at a loss for words, dumbfounded by the question. He couldn’t blame the guy, when he knew each option seemed equally enticing. Alec helped him decide, nosing Normal’s neck and jawline in a way that elicited another soft noise. “What about my mouth?”

He watched the reaction, licking his lips in what Normal presumed was anticipation. Normal’s hands on the sides of his face; Normal’s hips twitching convulsively against Alec. His voice, low and wondering. “I’ve dreamed about this...”

Alec couldn’t help the laugh. “Oh, this is one time the reality’ll be better.”

“You are a god.” Again with the awe, and Normal was pushing him down. Alec fell to his knees with practiced grace, reaching for buttons and trying not to think of Manticore. This was not about the familiarity of this routine, so effective on his deep-cover espionage missions and so unvarying in technique. Alec knew this suck, hum, tongue roll like he knew Morse Code and Mandarin. But this wasn’t about that—this was about overtime pay and the stereo or television or booze he could buy tomorrow. This was about easier shifts, longer lunch breaks, and job security. 

“Oh, shit, Alec—Monty Cora—fucking magnificent—“

He didn’t like the hands fisted in his hair, but he didn’t hate them, either. It was predictable; it was normal, as was the salty-sweet taste flooding his mouth as Normal jerked him closer. 

Alec let him ride out his orgasm before pulling away. He spat white into the wastebasket and stood, scrubbing a hand over his mouth and combing fingers through his mussed hair. 

“I, uh,” his voice was rough and his throat sore, but that was to be expected. Alec relished it, knew that husky was sexy, like the bruised, swollen look of his lips as he continued, “I can stay late again tomorrow if you need me to, sir.”

The “sir” came out reflexively and Alec kicked himself. This wasn’t Manticore. Manticore was gone. 

Normal paused in the process of tucking in and rezipping is pants to regard Alec. He could almost see the scenarios running through Normal’s head when the man blurted, “Why don’t you come by my place tomorrow? On the clock, of course.”

Alec grinned in what could’ve been enthusiasm (it wasn’t.) and hopped over the divider that separated Normal’s office from the rest of Jam Pony. “Cool. I’ll see you then.”



He stepped outside with his bike by the handlebars, not expecting to see Max. She was leaning against the building, arms crossed and glare crosser. “I’ll see you then,” she mimicked. “On the clock, of course.”

“Whatever, Max.” It was the best retort he could come up with and he walked away, his face burning. “Mind your own business.”

She kept up with him, wheeling her motorcycle behind. “I just caught you blowing the guy who runs my business, dumbass.”

“Still not your problem.”

“Don’t you have any self-respect?” Max snapped, stopping in the middle of the street. A passing rider flipped her off; she ignored him. “I didn’t let you out of Manticore to be some kind of hooker.”

Manticore. It always came back to Manticore, somehow. It was beyond Alec to understand—this wasn’t even about Manticore. He gritted his teeth and turned back to the girl, working to keep his voice level. “You yell at me for stealing, you yell at me for trying to find a legal job, and now this. I’m not getting in your way or hurting anyone. I just need money, Max, and he’s easy!”

“You’re pathetic.” Max mounted her cycle and sped off with the last word. Hypocrite. She would fence a stolen item, but making a profit off his perfectly-engineered body made him a whore. Using his assets made him a whore.

Alec sighed and got onto his own bike, pedaling for Crash. Whiskey would be just the thing to flush out the bitter taste in his mouth. 



The next day Alec came in to work an hour late. Normal handed over his clipboard with something like glee—his scheduled deliveries had been halved. Today was gonna be great. 

He passed Max—probably shouldered with the deliveries he wouldn’t be making—on the way to his locker and was surprised when she shoved a wad of bills into his hand. “Max, what—“

“You need cash?” she hissed, contempt in her eyes and tone, “Here’s easy: I’m buying you. 

"Try and stay off your knees for a while.”




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[info]themicemen
2007-07-09 09:56 am UTC (link)
Firstly, go you.
Secondly, go Alec: go use that perfectly engineered body! D:
Thirdly, go Max. T___T

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[info]amory_vain
2007-07-09 07:48 pm UTC (link)
Firstly, thank you.
Secondly, yess! He's too gorgeous to waste.
Thirdly, I hate her, but I love her. Dx



Haha.

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[info]themicemen
2007-07-10 07:54 am UTC (link)
Haha indeed. You know, that love/hate Max thing is right here too. I don't know why but her character/her just...irks me no end. However, there's just so much possibility/chance for her to be great..♥

Whatever, though. Go go Alec.

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[info]amory_vain
2007-07-10 06:46 pm UTC (link)
She's your classic TV Grrl Power!chick. I don't know why writers insist on confusing "strong woman" with "bitch," but they always seem to.
Still, she has her uses, bailing Alec out of trouble being my favorite.

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[info]ghani_atreides
2007-07-09 06:36 pm UTC (link)
Is there a follow up to this? 'cuz it'd be awesome to see Alec try to sort through this new turn of the events, I think.

I don't usually read Alec/another male, because I don't usually buy Alec/another male, but this one was a nice read, like the soldier in Alec would definitely see an opportunity to better his situation like this and just go for it.

Good work here.

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[info]amory_vain
2007-07-09 07:53 pm UTC (link)
Aww, thanks a lot. I really wanted to write creepy!Normal all over Alec, but it turned into this. I'm glad it seemed believable-ish to you.

I might try a follow-up, if I'm inspired. I'm kind of a one-shot girl, unless there's someone pushing me. I get bored too quickly, Haha.

But, if it happens, I'll post it. I do sorta want to know if Alec ends up going to Normal's place tonight...

I'm trying to write more fanfiction this summer--the original fic my RL friend and I are writing is stuck at her place, so I'm passing the time. We'll see if I can come up with anything past a short drabble today.

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[info]ghani_atreides
2007-07-09 09:42 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, I can see the allure of creepy!Normal, the man was made to be creepy!

Well, I've been known to be pretty pushy, given the right circumstances and motivations. If you feel so inclined, I'm here for ya!

And what would Max do, if he does end up going to Normal's... so many possibilities.

Fanfiction is a great exercise, and a great way of passing the time too! Wish you the best of lucks there!

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[info]amory_vain
2007-07-09 10:04 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, I can see the allure of creepy!Normal, the man was made to be creepy!

Well, if I continue this, there's the possibility of Normal getting pissed off/pushy when Alec cuts him off. That could be fun.

Of course, I'm thinking the OMGManticore!angst could start to get a little forced. We'll see if I can come up with a good idea for a new chapter.

And what would Max do, if he does end up going to Normal's... so many possibilities.

Oh, good thought. Bitchy/kind of cruel Max is my specialty. xD

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[info]ink_drops
2007-07-09 10:14 pm UTC (link)
Pissed off!Normal, with a side of pushy. That'd be a sight! Alec trying to fend him off, getting over-worked and over-bitched at by Max and Normal. He's such a tragic figure, I'm sure he'd figure his way around to make this into some snarky angst-possibly-porny-in-the-future fest.

Gotta love that Alec.

She's so easy to write like that. Either that or confused!Max which is my specialty

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[info]ink_drops
2007-07-09 10:15 pm UTC (link)
This is [info]ghani_atreides btw

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[info]amory_vain
2007-07-09 10:22 pm UTC (link)
Haha, oh Alec. He's so easy to use/abuse that way. Always resilient, that one.

Oh, yes. Confused!Max. She's like that a lot, isn't she?
When she's not beating the crap out of Alec for no reason, that is. *still pissed about Fugghetaboutit*

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[info]ink_drops
2007-07-09 10:35 pm UTC (link)
*still pissed about Fugghetaboutit*

I still hurt about that one. And I'm a girl, so there.

I think she hadn't really figured out what she wanted out of life other than remain free, which is where the whole "I wanna be normal" deal started. If she were normal, there would be nothing particularly remarkable about her, nothing worth chasing her for. Then Logan comes in and offers a possibility to slide under the radar, an idea of what a normal girl would have, and there they go calling it love and all.

This is where Alec jumps in and says "I'm not normal, neither are you, deal with it" and she doesn't know what to do, because Alec actually has a point, and if she wasn't so busy blinding herself to everything that stepped out of her built safe fantasy, she'd see it.

That's my theory, anyway. And yeah, I have given it some thought, why you ask?

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[info]amory_vain
2007-07-09 10:51 pm UTC (link)
It makes sense. The whole first season seemed like Max trying to blend in; season 2 made that impossible. I feel like the finale was really about her acceptance of this fact, finally.

Haha, you must be an Alec/Max shipper.

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[info]ink_drops
2007-07-09 11:01 pm UTC (link)
Finally! That show could have gone places had it not been cancelled. But alas, that's what fanfic is for. Innit?

I wonder what gave it away... was it the rant? the icon? the rant and the icon?
There are just so many possibilities with those two! Alec and S1!Max! man that would have been something.

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[info]varkelton
2007-07-10 01:10 am UTC (link)
You are being hard on yourself my dear. I almost passed this one up because of the pairing, but I'm glad I didn't. I can totally see Alec having been trained this way by Manticore. I like how you had Max stepping in, thinking she understands him but really being kinda clueless. That's so cannon. The only thing I'm at all unsure about is Normal's reaction... I can see him taking advantage in the moment but long term... I don't know, I seem to be going back and forth... I think he's more aware of people than his surface personality portrays... but no... I think he would if it started right after they met. Sorry to be all wordy on my feedback, but I liked it, and I'm kinda hoping to convince you to go further with it. Thanks!!!

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[info]amory_vain
2007-07-10 01:20 am UTC (link)
Oh, thank you so much for the kind words.

That's so canon.
Haha, yeah, Max is pretty much like that.

The only thing I'm at all unsure about is Normal's reaction...
Normal's tough, since he had such a minor role in the series. I'll agree he was OOC here, though.

I'm kinda hoping to convince you to go further with it.
Aurgh. I might, if I can think of a direction that won't be totally boring and predictable. Right now I'm busy chasing a Logan!plotbunny.

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[info]laytoncolt
2007-07-10 04:40 am UTC (link)
I'm not sure I would call this unrealistic, necessarily, because I can see Alec using everything to his advantage, and let's face it, he knows the effect he has on others.

Still, it's that last little section that makes me love this story. Max, who acts all unconcerned, trying to keep him out of trouble. I really liked that, even if she did do it in her own sarcastic way, especially because she did.

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[info]amory_vain
2007-07-10 05:02 am UTC (link)
Wow, thanks for such a kind review! I guess I'm just hypercritical of myself. Every time I read over something I posted, I can think of a million ways I should've edited/revised.

let's face it, he knows the effect he has on others.
Oh, Alec. I love that he knows he's a hottie.

Max, who acts all unconcerned, trying to keep him out of trouble.
Basically, you just summarized season 2.
I'm glad I got her right--I was afraid she'd go over-the-top.

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[info]laytoncolt
2007-07-10 05:17 am UTC (link)
All my favorite fic writers tend to be hypercritical, heh, but you should rest easy, the story is awesome as is.

I'm glad I got her right--I was afraid she'd go over-the-top.

I loved the way you wrote Max. I've never really been a Max/Alec shipper, mostly because I love their brother/sister type relationship, they kind of bicker the way family usually does, and I think you captured that really well. Max will put Alec down and mess with him, but she's not liking someone else doing it too.

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[info]amory_vain
2007-07-10 05:35 am UTC (link)
Max will put Alec down and mess with him, but she's not liking someone else doing it too.
Haha, so true. It's such a sibling thing (I'm an older sister). I'm also very anti-Alec/Max in the romantic sense--they're too much like family; it'd be creepy.

But I like their dynamic in the show. Alec was probably the only cast addition for season 2 that I approved of.

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[info]aquaocean
2007-07-10 03:18 pm UTC (link)
Alec is so fucked up and I love it!!! Love Max too for helping him.

Good job.

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[info]jasmasson
2007-07-11 10:37 am UTC (link)
Thought this was excellent.

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[info]magnifica7
2007-07-18 09:04 am UTC (link)
Lust made humans weak, easy to manipulate with a look or a touch—It was just another aspect of his training.

Yep. Makes absolute sense - and I love the way you portray the aftermath! :)

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[info]disanddat
2007-08-09 01:38 am UTC (link)
Found this via the newsletter. Cool story. Thanks for putting it on the net.

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[info]amory_vain
2007-08-15 04:51 am UTC (link)
Newsletter? Can I get a link to that?

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[info]disanddat
2007-08-15 12:28 pm UTC (link)
http://community.livejournal.com/thefreaktimes/

It's just a small newsletter, but I bookmarked it and I go check it a few times a month.

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[info]ion_bond
2007-12-04 02:14 am UTC (link)
Totally unrealistic.

I was really sold on the first and second acts of this, although I may feel sorrier for Normal than I'm meant to.

I want to know where the money came from, and whether Alec will feel like it's enough, and what will happen when Normal comes around again. This doesn't feel like an ending.

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[info]pyrokitten77
2008-09-07 05:46 am UTC (link)
Aw, this was great. I love Max's protective streak. Awesome story! :)

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